feedback on metaphor poem please I am the hot chocolate on a cold, rainy day. I am bright yellow, bursting with joy. I am the sun, brightly glowing. I am the basket of treats on Easter morning. I am the shopping spree, so much fun. I am the project finally done. I am M on the …

feedback on metaphor poem please I am the hot chocolate on a cold, rainy day. I am bright yellow, bursting with joy. I am the sun, brightly glowing. I am the basket of treats on Easter morning. I am the shopping spree, so much fun. I am the project finally done. I am M on the …

 

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